My Photos Project ~ Evaluation
The
main subject is client requirements: damage to school. I took this picture
because it shows how damage the school is and it has a nice colour/texture in
it, which makes the picture stand out more. The photo focus attention on damage
to the school as it is focusing only on the damage not on the wall itself. The
element of design that makes the picture work is the shape of the hole in the
wall. This photo could be improved by zooming out a bit, as it is a bit too close
to the hole. The other students thought my picture was really great but also
not good as I zoomed in too close to the damage. My photo compared to the
professional photo is good but not as good as his/hers photo. Yes the photo is
very strong. They do communicate my ideas of the damage in the school and they
are composed. The concept is Client Requirements.
The main subject is Exhibition. I took this
photo because the flower was colourful and it caught my eye straight away. It
reminds me of happy memories. It focuses attention on the main subject, as it
is very bright catches peoples attention at first sight. The elements of design
that makes the picture work are lines, shape. This photo could be improved by
fading the black in the background making it lighter. Mr Page thought my photo
is good. The other students thought my photo is good enough but needs improvement.
My photo is compared to this professional one on the left is good but needs
improvement. No it is not strong enough.
They sort of communicate my ideas and no they are not composed very
well. The content is Client Requirements .
The Main
Subject is Shadows/Light. I decided to
take this photo because the light was at an angle, which I wanted. It reminds
me of a Shadow clock. This photo focuses attention on the main subject because
of how there is only one part light while the rest of the area is shadowy. The
elements of design that makes the photo work are lines, shadows, shapes colours
and the texture. Mr Page thought the photo was brilliant but needed to be
zoomed out a bit more. Holli thought I did a great job, Connor thought this was
the best photo out of the other photos I took of shadows/light. My photo compared to the professional is good
but the other photo is better as it is more professional then mine. Yes this
photo is strong. It communicate my ideas and yes they are composed. The content
is Exhibit.
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